Guest TheMarine™ Posted October 8, 2011 you need to blend the elements better and the rain looks way too sharp ... but nice concept kIU Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
iEatB4breakfast 182 Posted October 8, 2011 Agree with TM, its cool though! KAI! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Awards
Maniak_uk 5,063 Posted October 8, 2011 Nice concept and lighting looks good kiu Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Awards
Pan 16 Posted October 8, 2011 Thanks guys, any tips for the blending? I've tried so many different things to try to get it to look right but the final result isn't coming out as planned... like the house to sky transition looks messed up to me... I'd like to repost a better version Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
EvilAngel 447 Posted October 8, 2011 Has lovely depth! Keep it up! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
eMoneyGraphix 7 Posted October 8, 2011 I see it hes on the left watch out! Well I guess it be he's right. Well on a more serious note I agree that the rain does look a little un natural but I don't see many other flaws it looks good. Keep it up. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lin 41 Posted October 9, 2011 I like the way you have the assassin peeking out on the left side. nice piece! KIU Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
deviantBucket 1 Posted October 14, 2011 To me, the guy looks a little unaffected by the rain? Maybe mess with his lighting, as the rain usually changes up light a little. Like the concept, not sure why its called the assassination though, KIU Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Pan 16 Posted October 14, 2011 To me, the guy looks a little unaffected by the rain? Maybe mess with his lighting, as the rain usually changes up light a little. Like the concept, not sure why its called the assassination though, KIU The Assassination title is because there is a ninja on the left if you look closely. Thanks for the feedback! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Toxin 210 Posted October 14, 2011 IMO, it looks just like a plain stock and u added some motion blurred lines. Try to improve the blending of the colours. KIU though. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Pan 16 Posted October 15, 2011 IMO, it looks just like a plain stock and u added some motion blurred lines. Try to improve the blending of the colours. KIU though. http://www.sxc.hu/photo/1331063 http://falln-stock.d...val-66-84068960 http://mjranum-stock...i-J-14-77348280 stars n clouds are my own... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shadow 21 Posted October 15, 2011 I don't think it quite holds the title of Assasination yet though, Maybe you could add a ninja crouching on the top of the rooftop like he's ready to jump down on the "shaolin samurai " down below. It could really complete this image. Looking at it again it does look a bit empty Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Pan 16 Posted October 15, 2011 I don't think it quite holds the title of Assasination yet though, Maybe you could add a ninja crouching on the top of the rooftop like he's ready to jump down on the "shaolin samurai " down below. It could really complete this image. Looking at it again it does look a bit empty haha, that's a good idea.. I think I'll try that and post another version later Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shadow 21 Posted October 15, 2011 Looking forward to it, I only got the idea from movies lol. There's usually always a ninja on the rooftops. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kim 434 Posted October 15, 2011 It looks good, Pan. Maybe add some shadows? Keep practicing!! (= Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
