Firen 1 Posted May 20, 2012 Hey Clob The Kids are to big Especially since the seem to be next to the tree. And they don't blend in the background -> try and make the edges a bit less sharp. Also add some shadows on the floor The light on them is wrong as well (the have highlighted faces but the light comes from behind the house). The butterflies above them are in a straight line which is rather unreal -> Scatter them a bit more! Maybe even one in front of the kids to add some more depth. But you got some nice colors there! Just try and synchronse the render with the background a bit more so that they really fit and than you got a nice piece there! Keep it coming! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Erik 121 Posted May 20, 2012 I agree with the above comment, kiu Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lin 41 Posted May 22, 2012 cute piece! Top one looks in better proportion. Nice colors! KIU Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
c.raвlιng.~ 187 Posted May 23, 2012 Nice concept but I agree about the size of the kids just fix that, KIU! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Firen 1 Posted May 26, 2012 It looks a lot better now! Just add some shadows on the floor for more realism Good job! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
