mystical unicorn 26 Posted May 20, 2012 did this a while ago Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Maniak_uk 5,063 Posted May 20, 2012 Nice concept and the effects are done nice but the bg needs more work kiu Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Awards
loqysha 20 Posted May 20, 2012 I agree, bg needs work, looks simple but the idea is nice, the broken effects are good, kai! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lin 41 Posted May 22, 2012 It could use more effects, imo. Focal looks good. KIU Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
c.raвlιng.~ 187 Posted May 23, 2012 I agree with the comments above it needs a bit of more work, nice focal! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Firen 1 Posted May 26, 2012 You did a good job on her! Nice broken effets there As already said the background is a bit too simple though! Maybe some sort of factory would fit! As it is now it looks unfinished Take it in your hands again! It got potential! If you do also add another typo Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
