Maniak_uk 5,063 Posted May 21, 2012 Nice concept m8 but blending needs work kiu Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Awards
Oxice 5 Posted May 21, 2012 There should be more shading on the water to show that there is a huge snake in there. Nice concept. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lin 41 Posted May 22, 2012 Agree with MK and Oxice. The water splashes look good. KIu Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
c.raвlιng.~ 187 Posted May 23, 2012 I agree with the comments above, KIU! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Entourage 1 Posted May 24, 2012 The Blending isn't that great, but i like the concept. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Newyork 34 Posted May 24, 2012 the idea is right, the smoke on the right and wings definately need better blending.. really digging the snake and the water splashes. KAI! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Firen 1 Posted May 26, 2012 Hey there Good idea but you need to work on the blending of the snake! She just feels wrong in there... Doesn't fit yet You could add some shadows on the water (on the head part - you did it on the body) and slightly (really just a bit) blur the edges of the snake. The light on the snake also differs from the light on the women. Try to adjust them Maybe you could add some more moss (right?) like stuff just like from behind the girl in the piece for a better composition and for more depth. And you need to remove the effect from the right bottom corner! It doesn't fit at all. For a stronger atmosphere you could also darken the whole piece. It would help the mood and the idea i think. You have a nice creativity there. You did good to add some splatters just do some more =D Keep it up! =) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
