Stairway to Graffiti

[clob 94]

[Kinetic 11]

Pretty nice

I really like the bright colours used in the bottom half

Its really nice, the only thing that im not digging is the part of the radial light where it just cuts off, it looks like you have forgotten to erase that maybe?

Maybe go over that with a soft light brush, but apart from that, its pretty cool

[Guest Chambers35]

Really nice idea

I can spot a few things that let it down though, in my opinion of course :P

 

First off, the random lines you left on. Looks like they're edges of stuff you've added into the piece for lighting, effects, etc. If you're not sure what I mean, the main one that stands out is to the right of the main cloud.

 

I feel the cloud with the light coming out seems to low for the rest of the piece, although I understand it's there so the stairs line up the it better.

 

The angle of the render doesn't match with the floor it's on.

 

Overall it's a cool piece of work.

Keep it up.

[clob 94]

Thanks guys will take this onboard your right about the light I made the beam in PS needed toning down

[c.raвlιng.~ 187]

I agree with the comments above m8, but nice outcome overall.