Tron Large Piece

[clob 94]

[Guest Chambers35]

Definitely not one of your best, Clob.

 

The colours don't blend together, like the render is primarily blue, yet there's no other blue in the piece. Some gradient maps could fix that though.

You can see the cut off point on the renders head And that vehicle at the front just looks placed on top too.

 

I do like the effects you've added though, the shatters and sparkles, but everything else looks like it's a work in progress.

 

Keep at it, Clob

[Lustre 108]

Not much I can really add to what Chambers has said. You've also got some feathered effects around the rear wheel of the bike. I'd try adding a few more effects to the bike as well next time =) Maybe some flames from the exhaust or something!

[cliffbuck 472]

not feeling this at all mike all been said nothing else to add really matey

[Half man Half biscuit 64]

Also agree 100% with CHAM,be careful with the cut out pieces,i see her head cutted out

 

KAI m8

[Ariyah 8]

Definitely not one of your best, Clob.

 

The colours don't blend together, like the render is primarily blue, yet there's no other blue in the piece. Some gradient maps could fix that though.

You can see the cut off point on the renders head And that vehicle at the front just looks placed on top too.

 

I do like the effects you've added though, the shatters and sparkles, but everything else looks like it's a work in progress.

 

Keep at it, Clob

 

Pretty much this. It is a decent piece though. It has potential. KIU

[c.raвlιng.~ 187]

Totally agree with the comments above m8.

[JaguarDesignFX 63]

Chamber said it all.. All I have to sayis KAI

[Aun786 0]

Looks alright!

 

 

Needs more lighting as the corners look too dark. More blending with the colours as it just looks plain.