Digital Graffiti Birthday Present

[EntemberDesigns 982]

What do you guys think?

 

http://emoneygraphix.deviantart.com/art/Happy-Birthday-Arturo-330734435

[c.raвlιng.~ 187]

I think it's pretty cool, great color selection.

[GOvectorZ 970]

looks good emg, looks good but i do feel the bg color is a bit bold on the eyes...but is prob me as still haven't woken up proper lol

[Maniak_uk 5,063]

Nice text and colours kiu

[Guest Chambers35]

That's awesome :'> Great job on that.

[EntemberDesigns 982]

Thanks guys. Glad Y'all like it. I spent 3+ hour on it ^.^".

 

@Jimmy. The colors are rather bright. I was just trying to stick with the color scheme I made in Adobe Kuler.

[xBraiNshOcK 207]

Artistic view:

The gnome like character on the top left is a great add. It adds both story and style. The colors look great, but causes problems and makes the design look abstract.

 

The good:

The font and elements

 

The bad:

What am I looking at?

 

Overall design:

The design itself looks very appealing, but I cannot understand the text very well. There's a lot of factors that can be making it difficult for me to see what it says. One being all the different elements inside the text. I had no problem spotting and knowing what the character is, but that is because it doesn't have any of those elements the text has. I don't know if you wanted to go abstract, but if you didn't it was poor execution.