EntemberDesigns 982 Posted October 15, 2012 This was an assignment for my typography class. We had to adjust the original flyer on the left and practice what we have learned about the element "Proximity". Let me know what you think I could use some advice. http://emoneygraphix.deviantart.com/#/d5i0yf0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Awards
xBraiNshOcK 207 Posted October 15, 2012 Huge improvement IMO. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nexus 22 Posted October 15, 2012 Well I must say you did and incredible job compare to what they gave you. KIU! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
EntemberDesigns 982 Posted October 15, 2012 Thanks guys. I am not very good at typography so I am glad to hear that this attempt was some what good. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Awards
xBraiNshOcK 207 Posted October 16, 2012 yea, its a lot easier to find what to read on your design, everything on the left is scattered every where and makes me not want to read it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
EntemberDesigns 982 Posted October 16, 2012 Exactly. I didn't know about grouping before this semester. Only a little bit because of how text would be placed on a sig. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Awards
Lustre 108 Posted October 16, 2012 Great improvement! But the distance bwteen "open to everyone " and the "required equipment" seems a little too much when compared with "Xbox accessories" and "bring student ID to the party". Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
EntemberDesigns 982 Posted October 16, 2012 Thanks for the pointer. I could see what you are saying it "Xbox Accessories" and "Bring ID" should be further apart to match the other distances, Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Awards