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Proximity Practice

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EntemberDesigns

This was an assignment for my typography class. We had to adjust the original flyer on the left and practice what we have learned about the element "Proximity". Let me know what you think I could use some advice.

 

http://emoneygraphix.deviantart.com/#/d5i0yf0

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xBraiNshOcK

Huge improvement IMO.

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Nexus

Well I must say you did and incredible job compare to what they gave you. KIU!

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EntemberDesigns

Thanks guys. I am not very good at typography so I am glad to hear that this attempt was some what good.

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xBraiNshOcK

yea, its a lot easier to find what to read on your design, everything on the left is scattered every where and makes me not want to read it.

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EntemberDesigns

Exactly. I didn't know about grouping before this semester. Only a little bit because of how text would be placed on a sig.

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Lustre

Great improvement! But the distance bwteen "open to everyone " and the "required equipment" seems a little too much when compared with "Xbox accessories" and "bring student ID to the party".

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EntemberDesigns

Thanks for the pointer. I could see what you are saying it "Xbox Accessories" and "Bring ID" should be further apart to match the other distances,

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