reckoner27 16 Posted January 5, 2013 nobody is commenting on my work T_T muh Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lustre 108 Posted January 5, 2013 Mm... There is so much going on in this it's difficult to see what is what. The giant C4D at the top doesn't really do much for the piece, even though the render is placed in such a great position. I'd remove the C4D and focus more on effects around the render, fading them out toward the edges. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
reckoner27 16 Posted January 6, 2013 Mm... There is so much going on in this it's difficult to see what is what. The giant C4D at the top doesn't really do much for the piece, even though the render is placed in such a great position. I'd remove the C4D and focus more on effects around the render, fading them out toward the edges. yay!!! thanks for commenting!!! as it is though i probably wont change anything on it but i'll be carefull not to overdo the background and give more space to the render next time... thanks!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
FrostByte 14 Posted January 24, 2013 Wow, It looks great & It's done with gimp (I used to use that before, it worked fine, but photoshops alot better) & that just makes it all just amazing, I like it, though some c4d's are in the way, concentrate more on the focal, cause it's not the first thing I spot, which it's supposed to be. Good job matey! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Exo 1 Posted January 24, 2013 That is a nice LA. My main issues are that its too messy, I do not know what im supossed to look at and my eyes go everywhere.. So work on some depth etc to bring out w/e your focal is! Good luck Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
