Typography #1

[Moziar 85]

Trying out typography, to be exact getting out of my safe zone. As far when it comes to what I need to change, that would be white spaces etc.

 

 

[Kim 434]

Nice idea, I like the simplicity. (=

[Kliddy 104]

It almost seems like there's two pieces to this. "All dreams can come true" and  "If we have the courage to pursue them."

 

I think the space in between the two ruins the flow of the piece. Maybe move the second part 'if we etc' to the right a little bit and up so there's no gap between the top and second part.

 

It's easier said than done. I had a typography class and had to do stuff like this. Keep it up

[Lionheart 505]

Nice words, good typography there , kiu

[Moziar 85]

It almost seems like there's two pieces to this. "All dreams can come true" and  "If we have the courage to pursue them."

 

I think the space in between the two ruins the flow of the piece. Maybe move the second part 'if we etc' to the right a little bit and up so there's no gap between the top and second part.

 

It's easier said than done. I had a typography class and had to do stuff like this. Keep it up

 

It's indeed hard to create typography. But I did see the spacing problem when I was done with it, which is why I wrote when it comes to changes it would be the white space.

 

& Thanks for the comments everyone!

[Kliddy 104]

Oh wow. I didn't even see your text above the image.

[HollowAsta 22]

Nice Work! As you said the only thing I see needs fixed is the spacing. Kai!

[Kainerok 21]

As you stated, your spacing is a major detractor from this. I feel like the 'ALL' running through 'TRUE' doesn't work well because of the way it interrupts the eyes when reading the text.

 

Great font combinations and soft vignette.