Into Darkness

[Meliodas 182]

 

Ok, I started making some other stuff than signatures/banners. Here is my first self made space, everything but top left nebula is made by Me . Even Planets are made by myself.

[Mikey 1,238 1 Item]

Very nice. The planets look awesome.

[Lysurrge 0]

Nice! I like it. And you put the 2 planets with a good dynamic.

But the small planet looks infront of the bigger one quit strange. Like you just put a layer over the Artwork. Also are there to many big stars. I would make less of them and some more small ones. Also would it looks a little bit betetr if they are more shiny?

The big planet would looks betetr if you make the shine a little bit brighter close to him.

[Stone 21]

Sweet texturing on the large planet bro. Does need a light source though - planets are lit up quite bright, but no star to source that light to. The starscape and nebula all blend nicely though. Nice job, KIU!

[Maniak_uk 5,063]

Nice work m8 ,great job on the planets kiu

[Meliodas 182]

Nice! I like it. And you put the 2 planets with a good dynamic.

But the small planet looks infront of the bigger one quit strange. Like you just put a layer over the Artwork. Also are there to many big stars. I would make less of them and some more small ones. Also would it looks a little bit betetr if they are more shiny?

The big planet would looks betetr if you make the shine a little bit brighter close to him.

 

This is My first time making something like this, I asked for critique on My DA page too, I really want to get a hang of it ASAP!!!!! :P Thanks for input mate, good tips, i didn't think of them when creating, but you're rite about depth of planets. I should make it more distant.

[Kim 434]

Good Job on the planets, Color scheme is real sweet too. Kiu! (=

[Spiridon 158]

Try making "everything" a bit brighter. I'm not sure if you have ever seen an image of a galaxy with a few main planets in the foreground with an amazingly colorful nebula just beyond them but I would love to see you do that. Make the whole thing pop more and appeal a little more to my senses. So... NEBULA = brighter. lol More colors and maybe even a lone spaceship off in the distance to give a sense of humility. Just a simply thought though. Great job with this so far bud. Makes me want to do another piece like my last space LP. KIU!

[cliffbuck 472]

planets look great matey good job damo 

[Taine 3]

I like the effect around the bigger planet. 

 

My main criticism has already been mentioned in an above post. 

Kiu!