Alpine 185 Posted July 17, 2013 My first photo manipulation type piece, i didn't follow any tuts Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Knox 31 Posted July 17, 2013 Just because you're going for surrealism doesn't mean you can ignore the basic's of art. There's no real focal here. You have 4 focals, the clouds, sun, text, and lightning. Also it doesn't make much sense and has no real purpose. Check out some of these LP's if you want to see what I mean. http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2013/197/4/8/home_sweet_home_by_leppakakaklifoth-d6dplbv.jpg http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs47/f/2009/165/7/0/one_with_nature_by_anthony_g.jpg http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/010/e/d/ed1b5fa98797059b653d244953417a45-d4lwrth.jpg Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DaPinkOne 37 Posted July 17, 2013 firstly well done for trying and putting yourself out there if you dont try you wont learn second i would remove the text at the bottom and make it more subtle in tones that compliment the rest of the piece and the lighting is too strong just try to lower the opacity of that or try incorporating another focal that again compliment and matches the tones. but like i said well done and good for you for trying and always remember beauty is in the eye of the beholder Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Maniak_uk 5,063 Posted July 17, 2013 Well its a start m8 and we all have to start somewhere ,i would have worked this side by side instead of on top each other,the idea is there just need more practise and better execution kai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Awards
Salvation 57 Posted July 17, 2013 Like sayd above evry1 starts somewhere. I can only laugh at my first signature and photomanip it was terrible. You made a good start. Good job and KIU! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kim 434 Posted July 17, 2013 Photo Manipulations are like signatures. You should work on your composition first, then blending, lighting, depth, & etc... Not bad for a first try, please Keep practicing! (= Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
