BLV 29 Posted July 24, 2013 some of the border needs to cut better looks alil pixely/choopy mainly just the brooms nice atmos and theres seems to be this line like across the bg like right above his head where you maybe joined 2 pieces of the bg together not sure if that last part makes sense really nice job tho Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Alpine 185 Posted July 24, 2013 Lol BLV, i took down the signature to take down the choppiness.. not sure how you opened the thread so fast haha, well yeah fixed the choppiness, and that line is part of the border lol. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Maniak_uk 5,063 Posted July 24, 2013 Its not bad for your first m8 but everything is to big ,keep it all small that way your focal is still the focal,i would have ended it between the 2 tombstones and put in a floor and its always nice to have the focal popping out adds to the effects of the whole piece kai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Awards
DaPinkOne 37 Posted July 24, 2013 great job for your first Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kim 434 Posted July 24, 2013 Pretty good for a first try. (= Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
