PenguinMaster 0 Posted November 28, 2013 Very cool, I love the idea. The light source on the right though, it pulls my attention off the focal almost immediately, and it brightens the C4D up too much and maybe a smaller light source on the right of his right arm, I think if it were to seem as if it was coming from the "alley"(that's what I'll call it), and not so bright on that arm, it would look a little better. Very awesome idea though kai! Edit: Also the light source on the right of his head I feel it's over powering his face, and the angle that it's at makes it feel forced, from the angle of that light source and the way his head is turned it should only be lighting up sort of the back of the head rather than the entire side, so maybe make it just hit the back of his head, but keep the brightness on the left arm as that makes sense. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Swordsman 155 Posted November 28, 2013 nice light and focal /kiu 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Maniak_uk 5,063 Posted November 29, 2013 Some nice effects but the bg doesnt really fit the rest and lighting needs work kiu Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Awards
