BlackKnight0739 67 Posted February 15, 2014 Made this for a contest on another forum. Still trying to get the hang of the Oil Paint filter, what do you think? After changing the text and a couple of other minor changes: Thanks for the feedback! :>.<:> Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Swordsman 155 Posted February 15, 2014 nice focal, nice light but not sure about the text, KIU ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BlackKnight0739 67 Posted February 15, 2014 I know, right? I wish the text weren't a requirement for the contest I'd leave it out otherwise. Do you think there's anything I can do to save it? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
daillestbeast 19 Posted February 15, 2014 For the text I would just use a simple, clean text. make it light blue and then reduce the opacity a bit. Very nice tag otherwise! Love the effects you have. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BlackKnight0739 67 Posted February 15, 2014 That's a great idea! How does this look: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
daillestbeast 19 Posted February 15, 2014 Definitely loads better. I would make the blue even lighter though, almost white. Also put the letters closer together (there is an option in the "character" tab to reduce the spacing between the letters). Is this the size you're submitting it as or will it be smaller? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
daillestbeast 19 Posted February 15, 2014 double post XD Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BlackKnight0739 67 Posted February 15, 2014 I tried the lighter text, but it didn't really fit the theme IMO. But the kernelling suggestion did work :'> I had the kernel set to 75 for the previous text and I forgot about it lol. I'm going to submit it this size, but let him know I can shrink it if he wants :'> This is 75% of the original size as it is, so I can make it bigger if need be too (I like to work on a HUGE canvas so I can get all the detail I want without having to zoom in so much) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
daillestbeast 19 Posted February 15, 2014 I was just asking because if that is going to be the size I think the text size should be quite a bit smaller and a bit closer to the render. That's the only thing left to change though I love it otherwise Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Maniak_uk 5,063 Posted February 18, 2014 Nice tones and colours but flow could use more work and text doesnt fit :'> kiu Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Awards
jenova death 1 Posted February 21, 2014 Text needs work, but I love the effects, and colors. Keep it up. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DaPinkOne 37 Posted February 26, 2014 great focal choice and love the combination of tones agree with the text but i hate text so just leave it out if you cant seem to grasp it hahahha Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
