GOvectorZ 970 Posted March 4, 2014 Just trying out an idea and no idea how this is gonna develop lol This is for print for a batch of 12 tshirts Feedback appreciated on this work in progress. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Charon 73 Posted March 4, 2014 is this for anything in particular? It almost looks like part of some kind of advertising campaign. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
_Ms_ 106 Posted March 4, 2014 Really great use of balance, repetition, and curves. Really great design. Only thing I'd probably tweak is I'm not crazy about the "Get It" font. The rest is so clean and smooth that the oddities of that font seem distracting....but only upon close inspection...and purely from a formal standpoint. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Maniak_uk 5,063 Posted March 4, 2014 Nice clean design m8 ,i agree would play with the Get it font more giving it that clean look like the rest :'> kiu Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Awards
GOvectorZ 970 Posted March 4, 2014 Thx folks and yeah i was kinda concerned about that font but always been a fav of mine haha But yeah, needs changing. At Gina, this was a request for a design for some woman that like to make a statement to other woman, etc lol Purpose of this is purely a fun tshirt that could be taken how one's mind works haha Could mean that "you get life" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Charon 73 Posted March 5, 2014 I guess I just don't get what the tone is supposed to be. It seems threatening to me lol. Because I'm seeing this pose: :p especially with those strange bulges on the legs. Looks kinda muscle like. And when you read it in your mind I'm just hearing "I get it! Do you?! DO YOU?!?!?!" The whole piece just reads as angry to me lol. I'm not sure if that was the intention or not. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites