What did I do wrong?

[YoYo 86]

[Kiz 7]

I like it
The white line throws me off a bit though, looks like an outline but the goes under some parts of the render?

[Maniak_uk 5,063]

Not feeling the text or the top striped border but rest is ok :'> kiu

[YoYo 86]

I like it :'>

The white line throws me off a bit though, looks like an outline but the goes under some parts of the render?

It was me messing around with the pen tool

[RosieRose 549]

Agree with MK about the text. Also feel the focal is a bit too big but maybe that's just me lol