iEatB4breakfast 182 Posted May 25, 2014 Bit LQ render in this one. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Awards
Maniak_uk 5,063 Posted May 25, 2014 Well the transition between the blur and sharpness kills this piece m8 i would work on it more making it more of a smooth transition and nice lighting in the 2nd piece :'> Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Awards
SLay 3 Posted May 26, 2014 Cool stuf ieat, really like the second one, nice blending Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Charon 73 Posted May 26, 2014 I agree with maniak about the first one. The furthest looking parts of that image shouldn't be blurry like that.I like the deer lady one, but the lighting in the piece doesn't compliment the lighting on the lady. You should try adding some highlights to her. Also, I'd ditch the wireframes. They look out of place, like scribbles on top of the picture. other than that though great work! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiz 7 Posted May 26, 2014 Nice man, did well with the render considering it's quality! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Monickit 96 Posted May 26, 2014 mmm the first is a little too blur, the second i like the concept Share this post Link to post Share on other sites