Rasputin 0 Posted June 17, 2014 Just working on getting illustrator art skills instead of map making. First go at an image that is not a map in years. Feed back on improvements would be great! V2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kill3r 56 Posted June 17, 2014 looks great mate the usb looks 3d but the cover is missing something keep it up Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rasputin 0 Posted June 17, 2014 Yeah I think you are right. A slender line around the edge with a slight shadow might do the trick. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
GOvectorZ 970 Posted June 17, 2014 Pretty damn good this Rasp, especially if you usually use Illy for maps, etc. Just a few minor things i see is all. 1. the red is producing those lil pixels that we sometimes see from Red, maybe just the blending mode that could of caused this which tends to give a lower quality look to it some times. 2. i would of used a gradient mesh on the case of the flash to give a rounded look at the top edge to give it more a 3 dimensional look there as that part looks off as it is. 3. change the color of the metal part, will help a lot with the overall look imo. 4. One thing that really niggles me about this is the pixelated texture to the body as imo, that should be nice a smooth. But maybe this was intentional and for that, is down to personal tastes. Overall, really quite impressive and just needs some tweaking and i see this as more of a Work In Progress at this stage. Just made me smile seeing this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rasputin 0 Posted June 17, 2014 yeah that pixelation doesnt show up on my screen in Illustrator. Must be an upload issue. edit: Ok got version 2. I am still having upload issues. Makes me worried about other graphics like signatures and how the quality is going to be when I upload them. Kinda bummed about it. Here it is after suggestions: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Maniak_uk 5,063 Posted June 17, 2014 Nice work m8 but text looks the wrong angle kiu Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Awards
Rasputin 0 Posted June 17, 2014 Nice work m8 but text looks the wrong angle :'> kiu Really? Must be the font I used because the verticies on the ruler said it was parallel with the bottom and top of the vector and the intersections of the geometric shapes. I will look at it again and try a different font to see if that helps. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RosieRose 549 Posted June 18, 2014 Think you already got the best advice from an illy user haha .. keep up the work and looking forward to your next one Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
