SGTROCK 1,671 Posted March 3, 2015 Continuing with the Stock edits and Grunge theme and basically having a a bit of a play with textures and the like Comments welcome as always :'> lol made this one a wee bit smaller than the last V2 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Meliodas 182 Posted March 3, 2015 it does look awesome mate, I would like to see how far did you went with stock edit tho because this piece looks really nice. I'm not so sure about the lighting, seems like you have 3 lighting sources which is a bit confusing for me but that's just a minor thing no need to worry about it . overall good work and keep it up. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Maniak_uk 5,063 Posted March 3, 2015 Well nice use of textures m8 ,i agree that think lighting on chest is all it needs ,would remove from the face :'> kiu 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Awards
Charon 73 Posted March 3, 2015 I don't really like the highlights. Typically when you're looking at a portrait, above all your eyes are drawn to the focal. This portrait was shot in a manner that secures that predisposition. The eyes are sharp and clear. They draw attention. Your high lights on her cheek and headphones create a new focus. Now when looking at it there is no one focus but rather three competing focal points. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Gremlinn 49 Posted March 3, 2015 Pretty cool..looks like it was painted on a wall 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
insanewaffles 92 Posted March 3, 2015 I like it. Love the use of the textures. From a distance the light to her face isn't distracting but once you make the canvas bigger it's almost glaring. I wouldn't say remove it cause I like it. But maybe play with how bright it is and see how it fits. Cool piece Sgt. KIU 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SGTROCK 1,671 Posted March 3, 2015 Thx all, looking at it again this morning I totally agree about the lighting on the face and the eyes needing to be toned down a bit:) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SGTROCK 1,671 Posted March 4, 2015 Updated V2 based on comments and feedback, definitely an improvement thx all for your input Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mikey 1,238 1 Item Posted March 4, 2015 V2 is much better. Cool concept and nice execution. Really like the lighting. Good job. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Awards
SGTROCK 1,671 Posted March 4, 2015 it does look awesome mate, I would like to see how far did you went with stock edit tho because this piece looks really nice. I'm not so sure about the lighting, seems like you have 3 lighting sources which is a bit confusing for me but that's just a minor thing no need to worry about it :'>. overall good work and keep it up. Asura, here's the original stock Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ezehkiel 111 Posted March 5, 2015 I love the textures on it ! very nice work 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
