dawenine25 4 Posted March 9, 2015 I'm feeling right now... :( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mikey 1,238 1 Item Posted March 9, 2015 Cool background behind the focal. I think it could be cropped a bit and I'm not so sure about how bright the outer background is. Cool texture and text woks very well. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Awards
Charon 73 Posted March 9, 2015 I don't know why but the 'Life is so hard' text made me laugh. I agree with mikey that the canvas appears a little too big, but I think you could avoid cropping it if you bled off your effects a little more. They kinda stop suddenly. You do have some small splatters on the outter parts of the canvas, I'd probably add a few more of those and expand the center effects but make them taper off more gradually. While I like the lines in the background, I'm wondering if it would look better to erase them over your focal, or at least over her head, chest, and hands to make her stand out a little more. Not sure though, just a thought. Sorry you were not feeling well when you posted this. Hopefully you're feeling better today. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Maniak_uk 5,063 Posted March 9, 2015 Well like the idea but agree on cropping the size or spreading effects out more and would also erase the texture from the focal :'> kiu Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Awards
Freya 2,561 Posted March 10, 2015 I really like this piece, especially the texture and colour. I would erase the drip texture from her face but I suspect that you wanted a tearful effect. Looking forward to seeing more of your work Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Awards
