je1992 11 Posted March 21, 2015 (edited) I am really not a great large art creator. I prefer small canvas, but sometimes I try to make wallpapers.. Here it is, and I feel like it is not complete, but don't know what to add.. Version 1 (Too bright for many) Version 2 (TOned down the colors but kept the concept) Edited March 22, 2015 by je1992 Please post the art without the spoilers thx :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Teg 15 Posted March 21, 2015 The image seems to be broken, or just won't load? Is it attached as a file or did you use a host for it? Sent from my iPhone using Tapatalk Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
je1992 11 Posted March 21, 2015 It is hosted via my onedrive. I see it in my browser that's weird.. I'll wait for others feedback to see if it is a real hosting problem ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Teg 15 Posted March 21, 2015 I think it's a Tapatalk problem lol Sent from my iPhone using Tapatalk Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
AlysCole 1 Posted March 21, 2015 It's not loading for me either. :/ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
je1992 11 Posted March 21, 2015 I've just modified the link. It should work now ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Teg 15 Posted March 21, 2015 Holy YELLOW! That yellow is so bright it hurts my eyes. I love the focal and the designs around her. However, I feel that the yellow is way too bright. Also, the spot where her hand is with the bright yellow spot, remove that so you can see her hand, or at least make it blend with the hand so it's more noticable. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SGTROCK 1,671 Posted March 21, 2015 I like the compo and the flow, just a tad intense on the lighting is all nice work Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Maniak_uk 5,063 Posted March 21, 2015 Nice effects and flow but agree the lighting needs work and would tone the colours down :'> kiu Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Awards
Carol 104 Posted March 21, 2015 Not much to add. Nice work, compo is perfect just a bit too bright Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
je1992 11 Posted March 21, 2015 I've added a second version with less aggresive coloring ! Tell me what you guys think Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
