SGTROCK 1,671 Posted March 21, 2015 Love the concept, for the contrast is to intense and the particles across the face of the focal is a little distracting. nice work Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Maniak_uk 5,063 Posted March 21, 2015 Nice concept but focal doesnt match the bg quality and effects are distracting over the focal :'> kai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Awards
je1992 11 Posted March 22, 2015 Our attention is not enough on the focal. Also, maybe because of the particles in front, some parts seem blurry. Pretty cool nonetheless Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Charon 73 Posted March 22, 2015 I agree that the splattered effects on her face are a little too much. I do like the concept of the piece but I have a major problem with the resources you've used. There's drastically different sharp eases and contrast levels that make it obvious that the scene doesn't belong together. In addition to that, the focal is the least sharp of the imagery used therefore detracting more attention from it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
