Ham606 7 Posted July 9, 2015 Well. It has been a good long while since I joined and only recently I managed to get around, sit down and see what I remember and what I don't. I also felt it was time to get a new wallpaper for my phone (hence the vertical) so I figured that I maybe should hit two birds with one stone. Without further ado, ladies and gents, voila! My latest creation! (It did take me a full afternoon and then some, and it was terribly painful for my aging brain :P) Your CnC will be highly appreciated. PS: I chose to avoid looking for a render and just played around with a quote from the latest anime I watched, just because it means a lot more than what I'm letting on. Please, be honest. I can take it :'> Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Freya 2,561 Posted July 9, 2015 I like the colour palette and effects but not sure about the text Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Awards
Maniak_uk 5,063 Posted July 9, 2015 Some nice effects but text needs to balance in the piece as stands out to much :'> kai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Awards
SGTROCK 1,671 Posted July 10, 2015 Agree, text unbalances this this piece, also think the BG is to uniform in terms of light and colour tones, perhaps consider adding so points of light in font and behind c4d layers etc:) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ham606 7 Posted July 10, 2015 First off, thanks for your comments people As for the text placement, it is a bit off balance you are all right, but other than that while it looks strangle empty, it is a phone background therefore there are buttons and numbers and stuff all around. Hmmm now that I think about it might as well upload a screenshot of the phone :P Thanks again ^^ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
