Nem1946 50 Posted September 23, 2015 My first Large Art Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Maniak_uk 5,063 Posted September 23, 2015 Not bad ,think needs some adjustment filters to bring it altogether more and the frame looks a bit flat rather than fit the angle of the bg scene :'> but good effort kiu :'> Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Awards
SGTROCK 1,671 Posted September 24, 2015 Good effort for 1st LA piece. Agree with MK above would also lose the shadow around the border, except where it is grounded as it looks out of place. Maybe add some defined lighting. Good work though Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nem1946 50 Posted September 24, 2015 Thanks for your comments. Now I have perfected the technique. But go see my work, he will give an idea of how I evolved during the time I've been doing this type of design, and at the same time I'm familiarizing myself with you. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Freya 2,561 Posted September 25, 2015 Perhaps bright yellow somewhere in the background to sew it all together and agree with the above gentlemen. Good work for your first large piece Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Awards
