ricko 433 Posted March 19, 2016 Version 1 Version 2 2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Awards
Maniak_uk 5,063 Posted March 19, 2016 Like the concept but think the depth needs work and text isnt really needed :'> kiu 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Awards
ricko 433 Posted March 19, 2016 which part needs to refine the depth bro MK? Is it the c4ds or the background? I need more teachings from you on a large scale. hehehe... I'm starting to like making big canvas. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Awards
Acro 17 Posted March 19, 2016 This piece would be completed if the depth is fixed, otherwise the effects and blending is good, good job though! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SGTROCK 1,671 Posted March 20, 2016 Agree above, love the colours and tones in the city scape and the fx work nicely with it, not feeling the text though, the stark white draws too much attention. Depth, everything seems to be in focus except the very top part with the jitter fx, so it's more about defining what you want the focal to be and perhaps fade out some of the colours in to the distance, nice work though mate like this one, particularly the city scape:) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ricko 433 Posted March 20, 2016 updating having version 2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Awards
Acro 17 Posted March 20, 2016 Version 2 is better, although, the focal could be sharpened a bit more so it can pop-out, otherwise it's better! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
