Artists Helping the Homeless Shirt

[Hunterish 12]

So ive recently been working with a Homeless Shelter organization, and they have two houses they use to shelter men in the Kansas City area. Ive been working on this for the last few days. They want a design for both houses this is my first, looking for some real input to possibly make it better. Thanks all. 

 

[SGTROCK 1,671]

Not bad mate texture is giving me eye strain on the PC though

Personally the texture in the main txt "Bodhi" is quite distracting for me it seems at odds with the BG, would be interested in seeing it as just white text?

[Hunterish 12]

Not bad mate texture is giving me eye strain on the PC though :'>

Personally the texture in the main txt "Bodhi" is quite distracting for me it seems at odds with the BG, would be interested in seeing it as just white text?

 

I will post it here soon, Ive got to run out at the moment, thanks for the comment. 

Ill update it all asap and repost. 

[Freya 2,561]

Definitely eye catching. Liking the boldness.

If this is going to be printed smaller for letterheads etc. the stripes in the text and the fine stripes on the shield will lose definition.

[Maniak_uk 5,063]

I have to agree with sarge ,you want the text to be the message and bold but the effect distracts from that,very trippy lol :'> kai

[Hunterish 12]

Definitely eye catching. Liking the boldness.

If this is going to be printed smaller for letterheads etc. the stripes in the text and the fine stripes on the shield will lose definition.

 

Its going to be as large as possible on the shirt.

When I send it to the printer and get the proof back ill know where I need to go from there.

 

Thanks :3