death Valley

[clob 94]

[Maniak_uk 5,063]

Like the concept m8 but need to work on balancing the objects so they flow,here it looks a bit crowded,the guy on the sofa with the rock next to him would have been better to use that as your focal and all the other elements should be a lot smaller and few of the shadows need work :'> kai

[clob 94]

thanks MK always wanted to try a surreal thanks for the tips on this one

[Maniak_uk 5,063]

Heres a large art manip tutorial i did few years back that may help ya m8 :'>

 

Tut - http://www.pimped-pixels.net/forum/topic/7553-what-once-was-tutorial/

[glass 81]

Work on blending all of the elements into the piece so nothing looks randomly 'placed' onto a background. Also think about shadows - if the sunlight is coming from the back, the shadow of the clock on the right wouldn't be behind the clock.

The concept is there, the execution needs work. Keep it up!

[clob 94]

Thanks for the tips an tut

[SGTROCK 1,671]

Not bad Clob, I can see improvements in certain areas of your work mate, agree with Mk above, beside the compositional aspect Mk mentioned the key things that you need to look at are blending, shadows to ground your elements and lighting, nice effort mate Kiu:)