acuna

[yubbed 214]

I'm kinda stuck at the moment.....

 

CnC is greatly appreciated!

 

[EntemberDesigns 982]

Looks cool to me. If you're feeling stuck doesn't hurt to try something completely different. Think of a style you like and take a go at it and see what you can learn from that.

[Lionheart 505]

never been my style...so cant say what changes may or may not be needed...  the larger of acuna , not sure how you wanted the body and or legs to interact with the letters, looks kinda cut off. or you may want it to look as if you wanted the leg/foot to come out from behind ... i just dont know...  only thing i didnt understand is there a significance of the flower above and interacting wit the smaller of the 2 players?  may be there for a reason , i dont know the player...

 

 

I been out of the artsy scene for a long time... but when i was around and stuck , i usually would look for inspiration from others works.. (aka collection folder to what inspired a spark in me) all different styles... one may reignite you.

i would also have a personal folder, unfinished works... look through them... maybe you have ideas that might add to the completion of one of your own... 

 

gl kiu

 

[Mikey 1,238 1 Item]

Looks pretty cool as is but you could always add some kind of texture to the background.

[Freya 2,561]

I like what you have done so far yubbed, but, agrees that the background has too much negative space.

[Maniak_uk 5,063]

Nice work and effects and agree on negative space  

[Uknown 60]

I dont think you need to add allot to the background tbh, with a commercial art style like this less is really more.  You need to focus more so on small details, flow, point of focus, ect. 

So in terms of what you have so far, the wind effect looks a little forced, i get the idea of what you where going for to give a sense of movement, but with the current pose and how the focal is positioned it looks forced, i would try to manipulate the wind to go more with how the focal point is moving, it will make the image that much more dynamic.

As for the background, the yellow doesn't do it for me. Dont force colors into your pieces, use what you have like white and red, just the yellow and then brown with the focals red and white kind of clash. 

Also make the text more pronounced, as it currently stands i wasn't sure what i was reading honestly, and if it wasn't for your topic title it would of took me a second to read it. 

Overall I like the idea,and the style, just work on the details, take the extra second to really tell the story. 

[yubbed 214]

18 hours ago, Uknown said:

I dont think you need to add allot to the background tbh, with a commercial art style like this less is really more.  You need to focus more so on small details, flow, point of focus, ect. 

So in terms of what you have so far, the wind effect looks a little forced, i get the idea of what you where going for to give a sense of movement, but with the current pose and how the focal is positioned it looks forced, i would try to manipulate the wind to go more with how the focal point is moving, it will make the image that much more dynamic.

As for the background, the yellow doesn't do it for me. Dont force colors into your pieces, use what you have like white and red, just the yellow and then brown with the focals red and white kind of clash. 

Also make the text more pronounced, as it currently stands i wasn't sure what i was reading honestly, and if it wasn't for your topic title it would of took me a second to read it. 

Overall I like the idea,and the style, just work on the details, take the extra second to really tell the story. 

Thanks for the input!