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[Lionheart 505]

Looks great , and you know me with advice always wrong ...   I think you can clean up the glow around the horns and still make it look good.. i would get rid of the outline it produces, and do a large soft brush the will encompass the light more onto the rhinos head as well. The glow idea is working from the horns to the grass. Think more radial horns as a center point and the glow surrounding the area equally.  Like the ears/forehead, they must get something off the glow.  May be me , but i feel the glow comes more from the light bouncing off the surface then from the actual light,  I sure you can have an outline , but it should only slightly noticable from the surrounding light

The shadow behind its right ear looks too strong.

 

Even your neon sig at the base of your sigspace.   glow is more pronounce at the bottom because the light bounced off is strongest there , you dont actually see the outline anywhere even above looks more like a soft brush addition extending outward as it finds a surface to bounce off of.

Edited May 27, 2020 by Lionheart
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[Guest]

Very cool and a neat idea

[Freya 2,561]

Liking the concept and the glows are cool

[EntemberDesigns 982]

This is cool. I enjoy seeing quartz/diamonds in art. Well done on the shading.

[zompu 171]

nice worrk, i think the rhino could use some more contrast and i'm not really a big fan of the blue lightning on his horn.