Guest FXD Posted March 13, 2011 Another try :P P.S: Yes i'm sorry for the bad Resolution..! :( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Whitebear 0 Posted March 13, 2011 - The render is cut poorly. - Some of the colors just pop out for no reason. - Work more with the blending. - Try incorporating more red white and black. - The text and font look pretty weird to me. - The effects are very nice. - Some of the C4D's look nice with the render. - 5/10. Get better renders and blend more. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cedric 32 Posted March 13, 2011 the hair specially looks poorly cut, did you cut this yourself?... dont try cutting hair when you a beginner its really hard to get right :P, kiu Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
law 3 Posted March 13, 2011 Well it needs some work m8 with the blending,the colors and the text...pretty nice effects though...KAI m8... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
