Maniak_uk 5,063 Posted May 26, 2011 Well not bad,cant really see wot youve done but put a stock onto the bg ,the bg is to blurred ,also need to work on the shadows etc but kai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Awards
clob 94 Posted May 26, 2011 Well not bad,cant really see wot youve done but put a stock onto the bg ,the bg is to blurred ,also need to work on the shadows etc but kai Thanks bud I rendered the focal, used another pic of the house placed focal in bacground hit it with GM PF tried to blend the focal, did apply image hit it with sharpen to add a bit of pop, high pass on copy layer set to overlay 50% opacity Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
EvilAngel 447 Posted May 26, 2011 Not bad but the dark and evil feeling from the twilight people, don't really work with the soft and serene background. However some nice work here.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mirage 12 Posted May 27, 2011 I agree with both MK and EA. I've never even seen any of the Twilights but the focal is nice in my opinion. I'm not a fan of the background though and it doesn't fit the focal. Depth is a bit forced and looks unnatural. Overall it's a great concept but the execution fell a bit short. KIU Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lin 41 Posted May 28, 2011 Looks like you did a decent job rendering the focal. Maybe try it with different background? dark forest, or something kind of scary?KAI Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
