Erik 121 Posted August 1, 2011 Work on the detailing behind the person because now its on it and behind it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
forhorsmn 1 Posted August 1, 2011 Oh. I see what you're saying. Thanks Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Oxice 5 Posted August 1, 2011 The soft edges of the wings that overlap her shoulders doesn't look good imo, maybe try a different way of blending them in. The concept is nice though. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kim 434 Posted August 1, 2011 Great compo but elements needs more work. Keep practicing! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lin 41 Posted August 2, 2011 nice idea,but needs more work on the fire.KAI Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Viral 131 Posted August 2, 2011 Background needs to be work on, Overall Nice job Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
EvilAngel 447 Posted August 2, 2011 Interesting, very creative idea... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
H3ll™ 402 Posted August 21, 2011 I love the overall concept of it and the whole feel,just need somes tweakings as mentioned aboves,but gj and KAI! Regards,H3ll™ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Don 73 Posted August 21, 2011 I will agree with cold.Wok in details of the fire and in the blending. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Guest TheMarine™ Posted August 21, 2011 well nice concept , but you should render out the girl then put the wings in a layer below so they are behind her, and i would change the background and would use some adjustments , more like brightness/contrast and color balance KIU Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tia 98 Posted August 21, 2011 agree with the above but a very interesting piece and luv those wings,kiu hun Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Gabbo 2 Posted August 21, 2011 Very nice concept and composition. You placed the fire-effects very nicely on the wings, but you just need to work on blending the fire-wings with the focal point and the smoke-effects also needs a bit of blending. Keep working on it, mate Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
EaKoNe 10 Posted August 23, 2011 As people allready said here you need to work on the Background and the wings blending. The idea is great and the fire looks nice just some adjustments blending and final retouching and your good. Keep it Up! ;P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cliffbuck 472 Posted August 23, 2011 dont need me to repeat so just good stuff matey Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Awards
